I don't think categorizing verbs into two types explains their importance (middle node on bottom).
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Oh yeah i dont think bottom middle node explains its parent node either. Bottom middle node shows the two kinds of verbs. Idk how it supports its parent node though
Judgement Methods: #1 Person with not much experience on trees: Top node that you edited can be shorter idk why you take two sentences to say one thing. Me: Yeah, I was free writing and didnt want to change or edit that parent node cuz I wanted to move on. I want reword like this:"This is the parent node cuz it's the topic sentence." I think thatll be better cuz topic sentence is what the paragraph is about.
#2 Person with not much experience with trees: Do you know why the two lower left nodes are ok as an analysis of the paragraph?
Me: I think I do. Im not analyzing much and im just describing in a few words what each node does to its parent node.
Person with not much experience: Could you say what you wrote in those nodes is 100% correct?
Me: Almost, I forgot what specific means. I think I should look up words I don't know next time. I don't have to look up the words right as I make the trees cuz it'll just add to the time I make my trees. I can add corrections afterwards.
Judgement Methods:
#1
Person with not much experience on trees: Top node that you edited can be shorter idk why you take two sentences to say one thing.
Me: Yeah, I was free writing and didnt want to change or edit that parent node cuz I wanted to move on.
I want reword like this:"This is the parent node cuz it's the topic sentence." I think thatll be better cuz topic sentence is what the paragraph is about.
#2
Person with not much experience with trees:
Do you know why the two lower left nodes are ok as an analysis of the paragraph?
Me: I think I do. Im not analyzing much and im just describing in a few words what each node does to its parent node.
Person with not much experience: Could you say what you wrote in those nodes is 100% correct?
Me: Almost, I forgot what specific means. I think I should look up words I don't know next time. I don't have to look up the words right as I make the trees cuz it'll just add to the time I make my trees. I can add corrections afterwards.
I had trouble with this one. I think I should've just moved on after the 10 min mark.